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Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Portraits & Figures

©2006-2009 ~deceiving-smile
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this hurt my hand to draw all the little windows so sorry if it didnt turn out too well...

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~cricetus89 Jul 13, 2006, 3:16:42 AM
Ohh...Hi,you again*wave*
For this one I didn't really get the message as clearly as your child picture just now.
In my opinion you can make the picture 'deeper' by making the walls darker as if to make a frame that concentrates the view to the middle.And also,the buildings need not be done too detailed because that will distrac the vision from the main object,which is the girl.Just draw in a few windows and leave the rest because anyway the mind will figure out the windows by itself.

one more thing is the shading of the body.She seems to be leaning over,so the back and the fgorearms need to be shaded.

nice try.

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I love stuffed animals.

Especially turkey.
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~deceiving-smile Jul 13, 2006, 3:25:16 AM
thanks for ur help. ill keep that in mind and when i can be bothered fixing it, i will. heh heh. im lazy!

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...to dream of the person you could be is a waste of the person you are....
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~TwistedGubby Jul 13, 2006, 4:28:14 AM
uv'e given me an idea, more like im gonna steal it lol.
im going to give something like this a shot. (jumper in the city)
u got the perspective and depth of the buildings down really well

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~Gorshank Jul 13, 2006, 4:51:24 AM
Tip: Yu've got far more talent with facial drawing and hands and the likes than i do - simple. NOw for the tip - spend some time doing some anatomical drawing in your RWB, specifically look at the back, shoulders and upper torso - skeletal and muscular in different positions. I spent a fair bit of time doing that as well - including the neck. It helps massive - i can't really draw faces or hands but for the most part my physical proportioning of arms and weight of a figure became so much better after i did that.
Anyways - jsut a thought! ^_^ :hug:

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A will to truth is but the mask for a will to power.
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~TicTacSuicide Jul 13, 2006, 12:13:26 PM
This is another great drawing. I love the meaning. Fav+!

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k like that last sig was purrty gay rite so like heres a new one cuz being all emo well.. is just fag rite?

MY BALLSZ!!
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~deceiving-smile Jul 13, 2006, 4:35:37 PM
thanks so much!

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...to dream of the person you could be is a waste of the person you are....
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~deceiving-smile Jul 13, 2006, 4:38:01 PM
thanks heaps jason! im so scared! i gotta have a LIFE MODEL in! ARRGGHHHHH!!! im too immature...u know that! hahah!....eeeeekkkkkkk!

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...to dream of the person you could be is a waste of the person you are....
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~deceiving-smile Jul 13, 2006, 4:39:17 PM
thank you...glad i could help u!

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...to dream of the person you could be is a waste of the person you are....
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~Gorshank Jul 13, 2006, 5:50:25 PM
lol when?

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A will to truth is but the mask for a will to power.
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